Silver Stained Silence x Takoda
The morning fog clung low in the valley, soft enough to muffle the world, and add a silver blur to every edge. Silver Stained Silence, Vi to the rare few she allowed near, moved through it like a ghost. Her coat carried its own muted shimmer, the scattered flecking of her rabicano appeared as if frost had painted her in passing. Even her steps matched her appearance, quiet, unobtrusive.
She liked the world best when it was blurred. Fog meant no one watched closely. But someone was watching today.
A set of hoofbeats echoed faintly through the haze, rhythmic and steady, the opposite of her own soft tread. Vi halted at once, her long mane settling against her neck and hiding her face behind a curtain. Her gold eyes narrowed as she scanned the faint world ahead.
Then a shape broke through. Tall, steady, and unmistakably unbothered by the damp morning cold.
Grey dusting over pangare buckskin, warm fawn tones bright even in the fog, the stallion looked like he carried sunlight with him. His mane fell loose and unkempt around a face too open, too honest. Vi shifted her weight, unsure whether to vanish back into the mist or stand her ground.
He chose for her.
He stopped several strides away at a respectful distance, with curious eyes.
“Didn’t think I’d find anyone else out here this early,” he said, voice warm like the earth after rain. “Fog’s thick enough to swallow a mountain.”
Vi blinked slowly. Words weren’t her first instinct. Silence was comfortable, predictable.
But the stallion’s presence wasn’t sharp or imposing; it didn’t scrape against her ribs the way others’ energy often did.
So she replied, quietly, “I prefer it like this.”
He tilted his head. “Hard to see anything.”
“That’s the point.”
He chuckled, softly, not mocking. “Guess that makes sense.”
They stood there for a moment as the mist curled around their legs, the world shrinking to the space between them. Vi watched him out of the corner of her eye. Usually, stallions carried themselves with too much noise, too many intentions, too much brightness shoved into every gesture.
He didn’t. He didn’t try to fill the silence, simply existing in it.
Finally, curious, she asked, “What’s your name?”
“Takoda,” he nickered. “WHat’s yours?”
“I’m Vi,” she responded quickly, before she regretted giving him her nickname. Silence settled over them again, a gentle blanket of comfort.
When she finally stepped forward, it wasn’t away from him but deeper into the valley. She heard him follow only after a moment’s hesitation, careful like he didn’t want to startle her.
They walked.
The fog thinned in patches, revealing flashes of early sunlight on the dew-heavy grass. Vi’s tail brushed softly behind her, long and drifting like smoke. Takoda watched it for a moment before asking, “Do you come out here often?”
“Yes.”
“Alone?”
“Usually. The stablemaster knows I like to be alone.”
Another pause. Another smile she could hear in his tone.
“Do you mind company today?”
Vi exhaled slowly. “No.”
She expected him to celebrate the small victory. He didn’t. He just walked a little nearer, still respectful, still giving her room, but letting his warm, earthy presence settle beside her cool, quiet one.
“It’s peaceful,” he murmured after a while. “Most days, everything feels… loud. Fast. Like I’m supposed to keep up with something I never asked to chase.” His ears flicked forward, expression turning thoughtful. “Fog slows the world down. Lets me breathe.”
That surprised her. She turned her head slightly. “I didn’t think you’d like stillness.”
“Why not?”
“You look like someone who prefers open sun and wide fields.”
Takoda laughed again, bright but not overwhelming. “Maybe. But stillness has its place. And I like being where things feel real.”
Vi blinked at him, unsure how to swallow that kind of honesty. Her heart tugged uncomfortably, as if unused to sudden warmth.
They reached a small rise in the land where the fog broke just enough to reveal the valley stretching below them in ghostly layers. Vi stopped, letting the world spill open. Takoda stood beside her, his coat soft gold beneath the grey morning sheen.
For a long moment they simply existed, two quiet figures on a hilltop.
Takoda spoke first, voice low. “You know… you don’t have to talk much for someone to hear you.”
Vi’s breath caught.
He looked at her. Not pushing, not prying, but seeing. Really seeing.
“Your quiet isn’t empty,” he said. “It’s… intentional. Steady. Kind.”
No one had ever described her silence that way. Not fragile. Not cold. Not broken.
Steady.
Her throat tightened, and she turned her gaze back toward the mist.
“Takoda?”
“Yeah?”
“Thank you.”
His smile warmed the fog itself. “Anytime, Vi.”
And for the first time in a long while, the silence around her didn’t feel like a shield.
ID/Name: 12745 Silver Stained Silence
XP Breakdown:
- +8 (base word count)
- = 8 xp total
ID/Name: 11468 Takoda
XP Breakdown:
- +8 (base word count)
- = 8 xp total
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